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    April 08

    For Her

    A CUTE POEM FOR A CUTE GIRL

    You changed my world with a blink of an eye
    That is something that I can not deny
    You put my soul from worst to best
    That is why I treasure you my dearest wendy

    You just don't know what you have done for me
    You even pushed me to the best that I can be
    You really are an angel sent from above
    To take care of me and shower with love

    When I'm with you I will not cry even a single a tear
    And your touch have chased away all of my fear
    You have given me a life that I could live worthwhile
    It is even better everytime you smile

    It so magical those things you've made
    To bring back my faith that almost fade
    Now my life is a dream come true
    It all began when I was loved by you

    Now I have found what I am looking for
    It's you and your love and nothing more
    Co'z you have given me this feeling of contentment
    In my life something I've never felt

    I wish I could talk 'til the end of day
    But now I'm running out of things to say
    So I'll end by the line you already know
    "I LOVE YOU" more than what I could show

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    小米 唐wrote:
    好有文采啊!仰慕ing
    另外,第一段的 qq是怎么回事呢?
    Apr. 9
    qwrote:
    动用了很多翻译工具,希望变成一首很美的小诗。可是水平有限,文采有限,除了感动,好像写不出更多的留言。我一边在做心理学作业,一边思索怎样的留言可以很吸引眼球。后来发现好多余,眼球若是有目标,又何须吸引?
    这个评论你不会觉得好,词不达意,好期待你的作品!马上可以看到我的人像啦!
    Apr. 8

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